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Vol. I, No. 4 January Thaw Jan. 19th, 2001

Local Writing

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3 Haiku
by Marc Awodey

Matsuo Bashó

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3 Haiku*
by Marc Awodey

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there were once giants

but they   were

       overwhelmed

by     trivial     concerns

swans are nasty birds

they honk,      bite

and chase children -- 

poets lie for swans

i once tried

      writing fortunes

for cookies    but found

       it had no

           future

 

Marc Awodey is the 2000 Poetry Slam Nationals "Head to Head" Haiku champion.  He is also a freelance writer and art critic for Seven Days.

 

*Ed. Note:  For those not familiar with the form,  haiku is originally a traditional form, composed in 3-lines and 17-syllables, usually 5-7-5.  The form originated in Japan, probably in the 16th c. CE, and the wandering poet Bashó is probably the first and best-known of the form's craftsmen.  ...  

In its migration to America, while some have maintained the strict 3-line, 17-syllable form, others who have abandoned it most often retain the three lines.  Awodey's haiku, by contrast, retain the 17-syllable form while abandoning the three-line element of the form.

In addition to haiku, another type of Japanese poem, called  senryú, shares an identical structure.  The two differ primarily by content & tone, with senryú more often focused, and more often ironically, on human nature.  In fact, it has been held that senryú is to human nature what haiku is to nature, though that may be too simplistic.  The differences are sometimes a little too subtle to always distinguish between the two easily, particularly after hundreds of years and a cultural leap or two.

For more info on haiku, see this month's Links to Books & Lit On-Line.

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